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哪位帮我的一篇英语作文修改下,
假如你是李华,你们班来自美国的交流生Arthur患病住院已经三周,请用英文给他写封信.
信的主要内容:询问病情,表示关切.介绍班级最近活动,学习情况等.表达祝愿
Dear Arthur,
It has been three weeks since you went to hospital.We are worring about you every time and missing you every day.I wander how do you feel now and Iwish you are better.
Being an exchange student from foreign,you just can not adapt youself well to a whole new environment.I think you can get over it with our help.During you absence,we have arised a fierce discussion about how to grow up happyily and healthily,a great number of students delivered their own view.More important,the sports meet is arriving and will last for 3 days,you can not miss it.With the wonderful sports meet approaching,we are looking forword your recover.Take care of yourself!
Best wishes!
yours,
Lihua
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哪位帮我的一篇英语作文修改下,
Dear Arthur,
It has been three weeks since you went to hospital.We are worried about you every time and miss you every day.I wander how you feel now and I wish you are better.
Being an exchange student from a foreign country,you just can not adapt youself well to a whole new environment.I think you can get over it with our help.During your absence,we have arised a fierce discussion about how to grow up happyily and healthily,a great number of students delivered their own views.More importantly,the sports meet is arriving and will last for 3 days,you can not miss it.With the wonderful sports meet approaching,we are looking forword to your recovering.Take care of yourself!
Best wishes!
yours,
Lihua
应该得19分